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The Implication of Working Part-Time during Study among Students at KPTMKL

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The implication of working part-time during study among student KPTM KL
In Kolej Poly-Tech Mara Kuala Lumpur

Chapter 1 – Introduction
1.1 Background of the study
The level of student achievement in the academic field can be evaluated in terms of academic achievement and also from their attendance. If they can attend to all the classes and pay full attention while in class it can give goods results in examinations and complete their study. However, there is one big factor that can affect their academic achievement, attendance, and also the current focus in the classroom there is working part-time during study. Nowadays many students do a part-time job while studying.We will find the implication and the effect before we distribute a…show more content…

The implication of working part-time during study among student KPTM KL
In Kolej Poly-Tech Mara Kuala Lumpur

Chapter 1 – Introduction
1.1 Background of the study
The level of student achievement in the academic field can be evaluated in terms of academic achievement and also from their attendance. If they can attend to all the classes and pay full attention while in class it can give goods results in examinations and complete their study. However, there is one big factor that can affect their academic achievement, attendance, and also the current focus in the classroom there is working part-time during study. Nowadays many students do a part-time job while studying.We will find the implication and the effect before we distribute a few questions to the respondent and based on that, we will know the answer from the respondents and a researcher will evaluate the problem.I have chose KPTM KL as our reference to complete this task.

1.2 Statement of the problem

According to rules of Kolej Poly-Tech Mara Kuala Lumpur, a student’s who fails to fulfill eighty percent (80%) of the total attendance for each subject without permission will be barred from sitting final examination. This is a serious matter and student who don’t follow the rules, will be strictly taken an action by management. The attendance in class is important part whereas students are in process of learning. There are several effect if student doing a part-time job. One of the

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IELTS Essay: Teenagers working while studying

by Javed Malek
(Rajkot,Gujarat, India)

Please provide feedback on this essay:


It is a good idea for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students.

To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Support your answer with specific reasons and details.


Intro. (Past) During the bygone days, teenagers had been focusing only on studies, and part time jobs were not heard of.(Present) Today, teenage students, the world over, have been engaging in part time jobs, especially in the developed nations. (Thesis statement) Although there are different views on this topic, I would like to state that it is a good idea for teenagers to take up part time jobs while they are students because they can learn about responsibility and punctuality; about the value of money and also learn how to work as a member of a team.

Body: (Topic Sentence) Students can learn to be responsible and observe punctuality while they study. Eg. They have to come to work on time every day, and there is no room for procrastination. They have to maintain the inventory, update stock registers, and have to be responsible in their duties.

Body: (Topic sentence) In addition to that, students can learn the value of money. (Effect) Students will realize that it takes a lot time and effort to make a living, and this experience will enrich them with confidence to face the vicissitudes of life. Eg. Students will also make the wiser choices when buying things with the money they earned from their sweat.

Body: (Topic Sentence) Moreover, teenage students will learn how to work as a team member and share responsibilities. Students will realize how to compromise with other employees when situation comes. (Effect) Students will learn about the friendship as well that comes from teamwork, which will then develop to a team spirit.

Conclusion: It is a valuable experience for teenagers to have jobs while they are students because they will learn to be responsible adults. They will have an appreciation of money and they will learn about working with others. (Future) All of these traits will benefit them in the days to come, in responding to the realities of life.

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